I do believe you guys had a great idea but I also think that you need to work a little bit more on your site if you really want to atract investors. So far, it is not user friendly and presents the info in such a way that people is not engaged in keeping reading. Good luck!
P. Barea by Linkedin
Than you for contacting me. Personlly I think that the app can be really interesting, however the big challenge I would see is that there are already platforms that offer different services which are already worldwide recognized. It would be difficult to compete against them and to attrac companies such TTOO and hotels if the idea does not offer something special that anyone else offers already, even you combine all of them. This is my personal review and I wish you all the best.
A.Porras by Linkedin
I’m really glad to see teams developing touristech from Mallorca. I guess that the objective of this page is to raise some funds. I will try to tell you what I think can be improved on the webpage as I would like someone to tell me if I were you:
– You need a lawyer, seriously. You can not ask for money like this, you could get in serious trouble. With every single person you receive money from, you need to sign an agreement and tell them exactly what they will get in exchange for the investment. You should include in the web the valuation of the company and what percentage you are offering. I seriously recommend deleting the IBAN and ask to get in touch.
-Check the grammar and the correct formulation of sentences. Try Grammarly, it is excellent.
-The order seems wrong, I want to read a quick pitch in the summary because if I don’t know what I’m reading about I will just get bored. – Team: I need to see it waaaay earlier. Why isn’t there a CEO or at least a Lead?
– Finally, you should focus in Eastern Europe, it is an excellent market, and you solve a problem for them, not for the brits, germans… They already know what they want. I have seen many similar projects fail because they couldn’t get what the customer really needed. I hope that this helps you but, of course, this is simply my opinion. For much better info than mine, you should check https://www.ycombinator.com/resources/. Keep up with the good work.
Cheers, Álvaro by Linkedin
Hi Rosen ,
in my opinion seems very interesting because our tourist people needs a specify content relates by tourism in Mallorca. So, we will increase our quality service and Mallorca can be more competitive destination that others european countries.. Nice 🙂 ..
C. Villota by Linkedin